Saturday 27 February 2016

quick write

yesterday our class had a writing task could quick write we had 10 minutes to write a story about the picture mr billings gave us that picture it is a pitcher of an explosion when we were writhing it we had to use 5 words fun run billings unicorn and santa the focus for this writing was to get our ideas down. here's mine.

Mr billings was driving to go to a christmas parade and he was in it so he was dressed up as santa. but t then a unicorn song turned on and he was dancing and having so much fun. he was having so much fun he crashed and his car set on fire he was sitting in the car and he decided at the last moment that he should hop out of the car and run so he hopped out and fan then his car exploded,


1 comment:

  1. those were pretty hard words to use in the same story! you did well Z.

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