my first writing sample

         

in writing we had to write a story using some photos mr billings had picked out for us here's mine.here is my inspiration photo

            the big adventure

one day a group of explorers were bored so they all met up and said let's go exploring so they went to a cave. they were trying to find diamonds and crystals. they went out to a hot dry desert and found a big dark cave that had heaps of cobwebs spiders and bats. they were walking and the found two tunnels. they were dumb enough to go through different tunnels and they thought that they could just mine and then meet up back outside. they took heaps of curvy paths and then they found heaps of shiny diamonds and crystals .  then the spotted each other but there were two big holes they were blocking the path plus they were really really deep you could just see the ground. so they didn't want to fall. one of the groups don’t know there way out of the cave so they have to find a way to cross over the holes then they can go out. they checked their bags to see if the had anything in there that they could use one person found a rope and through it over to the other people but it wasn't long enough so they had to try something else. they took a risk and said let's just walk down them and see if there's anything down there so they went down and once they were down there there was a little tunnel. they walked and all along the wall were heaps on diamonds the all had big buckets full of diamonds. they  keep walking and then they saw a light they kept walking the light got brighter and brighter. then the saw a tunnel and they got out but they went in the desert they were on a tropical island.

so they had to find there own food they cut down coconut trees and had to  catch fish . when they cut down the coconut trees they got heaps of wood and they set off to make a boat after a week they had a boat ready to go. but the were still wondering how the tunnel took them to a tropical island in the middle of nowhere? then next morning the left bright and early and tried to get back to their homes. they had been traveling for ages then they spotted something coming it was a big ship so they went the way the ship was coming from but then the waves started to get bigger and bigger the were heading right into a storm three little boat was getting smashed then it started raining and they got cold because they went wearing very warm close  because they were in the desert luckily they had their buckets so the were tipping all the water out . finally the stars went away and they started to see land so they kept going and they finally made it home.and they tell the story over and over again.